Memories

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That is a beautiful poem. Remember to follow the syllable structure of 5/7/5/7/7 in each line. That is what makes your prose a Tanka poem. ❤

rules640 says:

February 13, 2017 at 6:54 pm

Thanks!!
According to my syllable counter, it’s 5/7/5/7/7 only

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1. Colleen Chesebro says:
  
  February 13, 2017 at 7:16 pm
  
  Thanks for checking. I’m sorry if I miss-counted. My apologies. ❤
  
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2. rules640 says:
  
  February 13, 2017 at 7:19 pm
  
  It’s okay!! And I know some lines are actually looking much longer for the syllable counts.
  By the way I am so happy that you liked my poem.🙂🙂
  
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3. Colleen Chesebro says:
  
  February 13, 2017 at 7:30 pm
  
  I did. I loved your word choices. Thanks so much for having fun with these poems. ❤
  
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4. rules640 says:
  
  February 14, 2017 at 7:07 am
  
  My pleasure!🙂
  
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