The above is a tanka Poem in response to https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/01/03/colleens-weekly-tanka-poetry-prompt-challenge-15-change-beauty/
The above is a tanka Poem in response to https://colleenchesebro.com/2017/01/03/colleens-weekly-tanka-poetry-prompt-challenge-15-change-beauty/
Well done! I like how you draw the parallel between beauty and change… both are impermanent. β€
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Thanks!!π I am so happy that you liked.
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This was so cute!! I love it! Keep up to good work! (I think maybe this has been too many exclamation points, but it’s how I feel.)
I literally just found out what a tanka was this past year. I like them more than the standard haiku. My first one I ever wrote may be the best one I’ve ever written.
(https://whoiwasblog.wordpress.com/2016/09/29/this-is-a-poem/ if you were feeling mosey βΊ)
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Thanks for the compliment to my poem. I don’t know how people could express their feelings in just three lines of haiku, I think I will never be able to do that. So I also like tanka more.
I just visited your tanka poem, it’s really beautiful.
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Good job!!π
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Thanks!!π
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You’re most welcome!!π
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